Tuesday, February 25, 2014

Redacted poetry girl -

after the arrival part
urgent for home and family
while sleeping
the all important subject - their future

She looks disappointed that her redacted poem isn't deeper and more in touch with her inner self, but considering the book we are using is A Romance of the Oregon Trail - we will consider it a success.
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alarmcat said...

i'll have to give this a try!! your face is lovely … and your poem isn't bad, considering the source :)

denthe said...

I was trying to figure out whether this was a poem ... ;-) It sounds like fun, have never tried it but will... Love the wild hair and the print all over her face.

Fuzzie Fingers said...

A great face. Love her hair.

veronica said...

love the face over the text. looks fab!